I LOVE BOLO! You have to warp them young or they never come out right, indeed.
...of COURSE Ian has hold muzak on his cell phone.
Glad to see glimpses of characters on their own, outside workplace context -- yes, this is definitely helping them to individualize in my mind. Glad to hear Anna's doubts about Union Arms, to meet Sarah's cats and Ian's roommate (HI R!), discover Jess's family life, and see John and Cee have a really crappy date. And, of course, Team Fluffy Starving Owl Puppies.
I no longer think Sparks could be Non, solely for the reason that I don't think you (you as a writer, that is) would tip your hand that way, through the eyes of your Bad Guy character. But I think Sparks knows who Non is, though he's certainly not going to tell Tanya.
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...of COURSE Ian has hold muzak on his cell phone.
Glad to see glimpses of characters on their own, outside workplace context -- yes, this is definitely helping them to individualize in my mind. Glad to hear Anna's doubts about Union Arms, to meet Sarah's cats and Ian's roommate (HI R!), discover Jess's family life, and see John and Cee have a really crappy date. And, of course, Team Fluffy Starving Owl Puppies.
I no longer think Sparks could be Non, solely for the reason that I don't think you (you as a writer, that is) would tip your hand that way, through the eyes of your Bad Guy character. But I think Sparks knows who Non is, though he's certainly not going to tell Tanya.
~ c.