"He shouldn't have poked me," Sparks muttered. "Or shoved Erin."
I really liked Sparks's momentary impulse to break Byron's finger; that felt like our first real look behind the mask (apt metaphor is apt). There are depths to him that I hope will be explored. And Ian's ingenuity with the hat was awesome. I'm getting better at keeping the women straight in my head - I know Hanna and Anna and Sarah and Cee. Still working on Erin, Jess, and Zoe.
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Date: 2010-01-25 12:53 am (UTC)I really liked Sparks's momentary impulse to break Byron's finger; that felt like our first real look behind the mask (apt metaphor is apt). There are depths to him that I hope will be explored. And Ian's ingenuity with the hat was awesome. I'm getting better at keeping the women straight in my head - I know Hanna and Anna and Sarah and Cee. Still working on Erin, Jess, and Zoe.