'"But you said you'd have to fire him if you knew who he was,'
In the first draft when Sparks said that to Tanya, Ian was there so he heard, but he wasn't this time around so he shouldn't really know that, should he?
I think it goes pretty smooth anyway but it niggled at me.
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In the first draft when Sparks said that to Tanya, Ian was there so he heard, but he wasn't this time around so he shouldn't really know that, should he?
I think it goes pretty smooth anyway but it niggled at me.