I'm logging my minority report here by saying I found most of the references to youth quite correct, though they are rather frequent. But I agree with harkpad that even as a bit of hyperbole, saying Jack is six, social maturity wise, seems a bit off. twelve feels about right, ten for artistic exaggeration maybe, but six is overkill.
Blast, I had other feedback, but now my mind has been waylaid by thoughts about relative age. :-) Ah well, if I remember later I shall comment again.
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Date: 2012-04-24 07:17 pm (UTC)Blast, I had other feedback, but now my mind has been waylaid by thoughts about relative age. :-) Ah well, if I remember later I shall comment again.
As before, enjoying it greatly!