So, this chapter was awesome. I almost cried at Clare and Mem's meeting, I got tingles when William and Clare were talking, and Jack just plain makes me happy. Well done.

I haven't been commenting a whole lot because I'm in the middle of a move and my life's upside down, and what comments I have been making have felt terse and rather pointed, and I apologise for that. I've loved this story since I first read it back in 2010. My life was completely different then, and I think I poked at you to make this something more. I'm so happy it's becoming an actualfacts novel I can hardly stand it.