http://small-rodent.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] small-rodent.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] originalsam_backup 2010-01-19 02:46 pm (UTC)

The image I got from that passage was that she wasn't wearing very much, and didn't want to bend over in it.

I don't know if that's what you were going for, but maybe if she said something implying that her outfit was skimpy - ie, not willing to give a free peep show - maybe that would blend in better?
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