Hmm. I'll have to look at pacing. Part of the major criticism of Nameless was the slow start, so I went for a fast one with this try. As for plot...the plot is a lot thinner, it is a lot more about character and satire and event, but I'm not sure if that's a good thing, and either way, good or bad, the pacing should be more consistent if it's causing people problems.

I think for me...well, when someone describes something in a book I'm reading, I get bored and move on, because they don't generally stick with you; I mean I did a basic layout for the office in chapter two or three, and nobody remembers it now anyway :D Plus they often feel shoved in. But I'm making a note to examine it.