http://chimney-swift.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] chimney-swift.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] originalsam_backup 2010-10-01 09:02 pm (UTC)

One small grammar thing:
"...if working for Sparks was easy, none of them would be there."
I think that "was" should be "were", because of the if clause and subjunctive.

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