I think the flow between dialog and narrative is a tiny bit sharper, so it's funnier this time than the first time. Thing being funnier the second time is generally reserved for Pratchett, so: well done, Sam!

I have this strange feeling that all of the SparkVISION support staff are you, like we're watching all the people in your head run around committing random acts of competence and organizational artistry. It's a bit like all the Jack Sparrows, but with less Depp and more range. :D