spiderine (
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2010-10-02 09:33 pm (UTC)
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of the slightly-battered leather lobby couch
--> hyphenating adverbs that amplify adjectives makes me cry.
plugging in cords with what seemed to John like reckless abandon.
---> with what seemed to John to be reckless abandon.
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no subject
--> hyphenating adverbs that amplify adjectives makes me cry.
plugging in cords with what seemed to John like reckless abandon.
---> with what seemed to John to be reckless abandon.