ext_14849 ([identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] originalsam_backup 2010-10-07 03:48 pm (UTC)

I really am such crap at descriptions :D I should re-describe Sparks somewhere.

Tanya came off as very much the one-dimensional villainess in the first draft, and the romance has actually given her huge room for development, but the flat parts still shine through sometimes. It's something to look at as I work through the final redraft.

I definitely have an org chart for SparkVISION that's going in the front of the book. I really need to get on that...

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