ext_452734: (neal caffrey)
http://lizzledpink.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lizzledpink.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] originalsam_backup 2011-01-13 04:51 am (UTC)

Hello! -waves- Yes, I'm late coming over and reading this. <3 Adoring it so far. Most of my nitpicks have already been caught by others.

Maybe I'm the only one with this problem, but the word "mojo" isn't quite working for me. I think there's something almost silly about the word that keeps me from feeling the chills the fanfic gave me whenever I saw or felt one of those powers they have, and those chills were really one of its strong points, at least for me. Sadly, my brain is failing to come up with anything better.

Noel/Colin. By the way. <3 That scene. Oh, my, goodness.

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