Someone wrote in [community profile] originalsam_backup 2011-01-12 04:38 am (UTC)

Noel said, and touched Laney's arm when his face hardened. You mean Colin?

There are moments here where Neal peaks through too much. How can Colin get Noel an apartment outside? He doesn't have as much money or power or connection as Neal, so that sounded wrong, considering where Colin's living. Also why is Colin stuck in New York? My first thought was tracking anklet, but that's Neal. Not Colin. I may have missed an explanation in an earlier chapter. But that whole discussion with Noel felt like Neal talking.

And another vote for how does Noel know about Joseph?

Yet another anonymous lurker enjoying this so far. Fan of White Collar and read the original Without a Trace, but this is amazingly fleshed out.

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