I know you commented AGES ago but I'm just now getting through the last of the feedback and wanted to say thank you -- I'm definitely chewing over what you've said :) Some things I hope have been fixed in the new draft, but it's all grist for the mill. And the Spanish fix is especially appreciated (I can't take credit for La Mugre -- that's an actual Mexican-American east coast gang).

Anyway, thanks again. I appreciate it!