ext_1686 ([identity profile] maeritrae.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] originalsam_backup 2012-04-28 10:01 pm (UTC)

I think if you left out the second "that" it would be mostly correct if slightly more colloquial, and flow a lot more smoothly.
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