This chapter reads like it would be better as a movie, somehow. Maybe because it was mostly dialogue and descriptive imagery and not a lot of interiority. Not that that's a bad thing, it's just the impression I got. POSTED IN CAMBRIDGE, ENGLAND FOR DELIVERY TO EDINBURGH, SCOTLAND Hm, not sure what things were like back then or whenever this is supposed to be set, but we don't write "Scotland" in the address... Like, my address would just be XX, YY Street, EH11 XY Edinburgh. Or if I was writing internationally, I'd add UNITED KINGDOM on the end.
Not a big deal, just thought you might want to know for purposes of authenticity :D Because as an Edinburgher I certainly noticed the weird posting thing!
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POSTED IN CAMBRIDGE, ENGLAND FOR DELIVERY TO EDINBURGH, SCOTLAND
Hm, not sure what things were like back then or whenever this is supposed to be set, but we don't write "Scotland" in the address... Like, my address would just be XX, YY Street, EH11 XY Edinburgh. Or if I was writing internationally, I'd add UNITED KINGDOM on the end.
Not a big deal, just thought you might want to know for purposes of authenticity :D Because as an Edinburgher I certainly noticed the weird posting thing!