- This is a distance thing. How low down are they - and how long is the rope - that Purva can grab ahold? I'm sure you have it laid out in your head, but it isn't translating into mine.
They get quite low, and to my mind Purva was in the rigging; I'm not really sure there's a way to clarify that in the story, I kind of just thought people would assume it was...low enough. But I'll look at it.
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They get quite low, and to my mind Purva was in the rigging; I'm not really sure there's a way to clarify that in the story, I kind of just thought people would assume it was...low enough. But I'll look at it.
Other fixes: fixed! :)