http://belgianqueen.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] belgianqueen.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] originalsam_backup 2012-05-08 03:28 am (UTC)

"...which is why men like Plater can still farmstead."
--- 'farmstead' as a verb feels a little ungainly to me, though it may be widely accepted, and I just haven't quite caught up! (In which case take no notice.) '...which is why men like Plater can still farm' feels more rhythmical.

Lovely chapter; interesting detail and suspenseful -- draws you along purposefully.

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