ext_71606 ([identity profile] emei.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] originalsam_backup 2012-05-08 10:51 am (UTC)

Very much enjoying the more intricate undercover stuff here, it's fascinating.

I'm still hoping for more of Clare and Purva, both in conversation and direct interaction between the two of them, and in the more introperspective POV stuff. I feel like I can't get a grip on how they relate to each other, what they think about each other. All the other relationships within the main four come across clearer (Jack & Clare, Clare & Ellis, Ellis & Jack, Jack & Purva, Purva & Ellis). Getting to see some of how they handle their lunch and shopping with Mrs Bell would've been great, for instance.

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