The original draft was a lot of Christopher talking about himself, at the start, and I cut that because it was contrived, but I do need to give more about him earlier on. I don't think I describe him once in the whole book. Or the others, actually. Huh.
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Date: 2009-02-10 11:27 pm (UTC)The original draft was a lot of Christopher talking about himself, at the start, and I cut that because it was contrived, but I do need to give more about him earlier on. I don't think I describe him once in the whole book. Or the others, actually. Huh.
*makes note in BIG CAPS LETTERS about this*