I don't really have much to offer in the way of constructive criticism here; I quite simply enjoyed this and am looking forward to the next chapter.
I'm finding it very interesting, however, in light of your post from last week (http://copperbadge.livejournal.com/2823931.html), where you talked about the way in which your fanfic stems from the way you identify with certain characters in canon. When I read Nameless after reading that post of yours, I could definitely see shades of Remus Lupin in both Christopher and Lucas, and I am definitely seeing shades of Ianto in Valet/Carry. Which is not to say that they don't come across as unique chararcters in their own right; they most certainly do. But I can see the influences there, and that is really cool.
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Date: 2009-08-14 08:06 am (UTC)I'm finding it very interesting, however, in light of your post from last week (http://copperbadge.livejournal.com/2823931.html), where you talked about the way in which your fanfic stems from the way you identify with certain characters in canon. When I read Nameless after reading that post of yours, I could definitely see shades of Remus Lupin in both Christopher and Lucas, and I am definitely seeing shades of Ianto in Valet/Carry. Which is not to say that they don't come across as unique chararcters in their own right; they most certainly do. But I can see the influences there, and that is really cool.