Hurrah, I get to read these two chapters on the same day! The meta is making me splutter on my coffee - specifically the bit where Ian breaks his wrist, and the internet wank.
Two tiny nitpicky things that threw me off:
"this guy has a readership in the high double digits" - he has 95 readers? Is it a newspaper term that means thousands, or something? Puzzled over that for a bit.
"I don't want to talk about it," Ian sulked - can you sulk a word? Probably just a style preference.
Hee, looking forward to the interns now. You can just feel the awkward vibes.
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Date: 2010-01-16 04:51 pm (UTC)Two tiny nitpicky things that threw me off:
"this guy has a readership in the high double digits" - he has 95 readers? Is it a newspaper term that means thousands, or something? Puzzled over that for a bit.
"I don't want to talk about it," Ian sulked - can you sulk a word? Probably just a style preference.
Hee, looking forward to the interns now. You can just feel the awkward vibes.