I am, first of all, adoring this story, and am so pleased you're so good at procrastination.
I'm keeping the characters more or less straight as I go through; my main problem (and, yes, it probably is my problem rather than yours) is that because I identify Ian as you, to a degree, I expect every scene to be in his point of view, even when it isn't!
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Date: 2010-01-16 08:26 pm (UTC)I'm keeping the characters more or less straight as I go through; my main problem (and, yes, it probably is my problem rather than yours) is that because I identify Ian as you, to a degree, I expect every scene to be in his point of view, even when it isn't!
Excitedly anticipating chapter three...