Hey, fun and educational! I'd never heard of astroturf before. The characters are coming together nicely, though I have to admit I had to peek back at the last chapter on some of the names.
I'm now fully convinced you are Ian and Bo is secretly John Barrowman mixed in with BossBoss. Does BossBoss sing as well?
"If they are, trust me, you don't want them," Ian replied, poking a freezer-burned chunk of broccoli.
May I suggest adding a 'through the bag' or something here, because it took me a while to wonder how it got out of the bag, or if Ian was just holding a chunk of frozen veggies.
"You did?" Sarah said. "We need more than one intern?"
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Date: 2010-01-17 12:02 pm (UTC)I'm now fully convinced you are Ian and Bo is secretly John Barrowman mixed in with BossBoss. Does BossBoss sing as well?
"If they are, trust me, you don't want them," Ian replied, poking a freezer-burned chunk of broccoli.
May I suggest adding a 'through the bag' or something here, because it took me a while to wonder how it got out of the bag, or if Ian was just holding a chunk of frozen veggies.
"You did?" Sarah said. "We need more than one intern?"
This was brilliant.