Yeah -- one of the beta suggestions I had was to show his notoriety a bit more, and I did that via other characters instead of doing it through him, mostly because...it's really hard to be funny on command :D :D But I think I do need to put more of Him into the opening chapters and less of His Views.
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Date: 2010-01-18 05:44 pm (UTC)