The image I got from that passage was that she wasn't wearing very much, and didn't want to bend over in it.
I don't know if that's what you were going for, but maybe if she said something implying that her outfit was skimpy - ie, not willing to give a free peep show - maybe that would blend in better?
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Date: 2010-01-19 02:46 pm (UTC)I don't know if that's what you were going for, but maybe if she said something implying that her outfit was skimpy - ie, not willing to give a free peep show - maybe that would blend in better?