It was definitely my intent to shift the reader's guess from chapter to chapter -- I want that sort of "Oh, it could be X!" feeling, because that makes the payoff bigger. :D
You're not tracking precisely to the red herrings I've been sowing, but pretty closely, and the fact that you're moving from one suspect to another is enough for me. :)
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Date: 2010-01-24 06:27 pm (UTC)You're not tracking precisely to the red herrings I've been sowing, but pretty closely, and the fact that you're moving from one suspect to another is enough for me. :)