Yeah, that first chapter's going to be a huge struggle to rewrite, but it's got to be done. Glad to hear that from someone who's read all the way through in a go, so that I know it's not just the disjointedness of every-other-day as a chapter.
Originally Hanna was something of a minor character, but I admit I'm charmed by her myself. I like her, poor kid.
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Date: 2010-01-24 06:28 pm (UTC)Originally Hanna was something of a minor character, but I admit I'm charmed by her myself. I like her, poor kid.