Date: 2010-01-24 08:11 pm (UTC)
COOKIE MISSION! It sounded a lot like coffee break at work when I brought cookies by the way.
For Union Arm: we begin to get he's weird only last chapter - the explosion here seems almost too fast. There should be more about the fact he's giving off off vibes, and earlier. Or maybe not.
Sparks being uncheery was worrying, he's not made to be uncheery! I like how the team is weirded out by it too. And it's obvious here that they are a team and a good one.

"Yes, boss," they chorused. The other diners in Beermaki looked up in mild alarm. *crack up* We do this, alarming people in public places. It's fun.
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