Twice during this chapter I had to stop, go to the chat I was having with a friend who is also reading this chapter, and say things like 'OMG I LOVE HANNA/IAN.'
I frequently wish I could pause life. I'm so glad I'm not the only one.
Actual comment regarding the story- I thought internship positions were typically for college students? I just don't really remember having an internship option in high school, but that could be me.
Also, Naomi glanced at Sparks, who was flailing with joy at seeing someone he apparently knew (or was just meeting; sometimes with Sparks it was difficult to know). and ...having a fit," she said, as Sparks threw both hands in the air to wave at some donor he apparently knew, behind a crowd of other people. seem really repetitive. I think it might just be because we don't hear anything about Sparks between these two mentions.
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Date: 2010-01-26 07:53 pm (UTC)IAN IS ALSO MADE OF AWESOME.
Twice during this chapter I had to stop, go to the chat I was having with a friend who is also reading this chapter, and say things like 'OMG I LOVE HANNA/IAN.'
I frequently wish I could pause life. I'm so glad I'm not the only one.
Actual comment regarding the story- I thought internship positions were typically for college students? I just don't really remember having an internship option in high school, but that could be me.
Also, Naomi glanced at Sparks, who was flailing with joy at seeing someone he apparently knew (or was just meeting; sometimes with Sparks it was difficult to know). and ...having a fit," she said, as Sparks threw both hands in the air to wave at some donor he apparently knew, behind a crowd of other people. seem really repetitive. I think it might just be because we don't hear anything about Sparks between these two mentions.