Ooooh, many interesting things in this chapter! The plot is picking up.
1) Loved the cake near-catastrophe and Hanna's initiative.
2) Uh-oh, another surprise move from Union Arms. I hope nothing terrible happens to Anna and her other coworkers are in on the plan (which they should be, since she already told them she was breaking up).
3) Yay for Jess slapping down Tanya. Still worried about what she's planning, though I'm more looking forward to how Sarah's going to take her down afterward. Very intriguing about Ian's request, anyway.
4) Lol, Ian and Hanna's drunken conversation. I'm very intrigued by how you're expanding on his character apart from your own. HILARIOUS bit with the suggestion and clarification of Ian/Zeke. (Just for a moment, imagine how the Cafe would have exploded if you had actually made Ian/Zeke a couple.) I hope Hanna gets her place in the company, at least to raise money for college
5) I'm trying not to guess about who Non Prophet is, but it is hard when you're gradually closing the pool. :P
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Date: 2010-01-26 10:27 pm (UTC)1) Loved the cake near-catastrophe and Hanna's initiative.
2) Uh-oh, another surprise move from Union Arms. I hope nothing terrible happens to Anna and her other coworkers are in on the plan (which they should be, since she already told them she was breaking up).
3) Yay for Jess slapping down Tanya. Still worried about what she's planning, though I'm more looking forward to how Sarah's going to take her down afterward. Very intriguing about Ian's request, anyway.
4) Lol, Ian and Hanna's drunken conversation. I'm very intrigued by how you're expanding on his character apart from your own. HILARIOUS bit with the suggestion and clarification of Ian/Zeke. (Just for a moment, imagine how the Cafe would have exploded if you had actually made Ian/Zeke a couple.) I hope Hanna gets her place in the company, at least to raise money for college
5) I'm trying not to guess about who Non Prophet is, but it is hard when you're gradually closing the pool. :P