Although your description of each character was limited, you did give enough to keep them seperate and personalized. Perhaps I missed it but there didn't seem to be any description for Sarah. You told either the hair color or at least job description for the others but I totally missed who Sarah is. Perhaps in the following chapters.
One quirk of mine is reading the last chapter of mysteries to catch the killer's name so that I can follow the direction along in the book. I enjoyed catching the clues and misdirects for Non. You're very slick.
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Date: 2010-10-01 03:26 pm (UTC)One quirk of mine is reading the last chapter of mysteries to catch the killer's name so that I can follow the direction along in the book. I enjoyed catching the clues and misdirects for Non. You're very slick.