Date: 2010-10-01 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chimney-swift.livejournal.com
One small grammar thing:
"...if working for Sparks was easy, none of them would be there."
I think that "was" should be "were", because of the if clause and subjunctive.
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