"I need to make a list," Erin announced. "Two lists. Clients to call tomorrow and clients to call at home tonight. John, can you -- "
But then!
Erin was left standing alone, listening to them yell down the hallways at each other[...]Sometimes being a manager meant doing the work of three people; sometimes it meant that while everyone else ran around insanely, you had nothing to do at all.
I am confused by this! I though she was making lists! Also, Vicky got left out of "who is going where" bit as everyone abandons the conference room. And Roxy has no mention of what she's contributing either, which also means she's either hanging with Vicky and Erin in the conference room, or has magically vanished!
But man, I totally love Charitable Giving, even with the huge ensemble. The way you've defined the characters this time round has definitely made it easier for me to keep track of them.
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Date: 2010-10-01 09:33 pm (UTC)But then!
Erin was left standing alone, listening to them yell down the hallways at each other[...]Sometimes being a manager meant doing the work of three people; sometimes it meant that while everyone else ran around insanely, you had nothing to do at all.
I am confused by this! I though she was making lists!
Also, Vicky got left out of "who is going where" bit as everyone abandons the conference room. And Roxy has no mention of what she's contributing either, which also means she's either hanging with Vicky and Erin in the conference room, or has magically vanished!
But man, I totally love Charitable Giving, even with the huge ensemble. The way you've defined the characters this time round has definitely made it easier for me to keep track of them.