Hey, Sam. This is just something that was jarring for me, if only because I've read both drafts and know the story. This would be less noticeable to someone new to the story, but... so the sock puppet issue just came up. However, a few chapters back (circa the webinars hullabaloo and 'distract sparks three times and he tends to forget about it) you brought up sock puppet theater and I had a moment of 'wait... has the sockpuppet thing happened yet?'. The sockpuppet theater thing isn't as funny without the context of Home Fund's internet flap.
My two cents, let me give you them.
Otherwise, I'm really enjoying seeing more of the cast's thoughts and 'seeing' them a bit better in terms of description. Before, they were just kind of a cloud of names and I couldn't think of any faces to put to them, not even relevant details like 'so and so has black hair' or 'whatisface has got a ponytail'. Thumbs up, Sam!
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Date: 2010-10-03 07:04 pm (UTC)My two cents, let me give you them.
Otherwise, I'm really enjoying seeing more of the cast's thoughts and 'seeing' them a bit better in terms of description. Before, they were just kind of a cloud of names and I couldn't think of any faces to put to them, not even relevant details like 'so and so has black hair' or 'whatisface has got a ponytail'. Thumbs up, Sam!