ext_14849 ([identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] originalsam_backup 2011-01-09 04:27 pm (UTC)

There is definitely some tense wonkiness with that last line. I may fix it by bringing some flashbacks into the prologue.

People seem so divided about the but-but line, I don't even know :D
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