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aunty_marion ([personal profile] aunty_marion) wrote in [community profile] originalsam_backup 2011-01-09 05:54 pm (UTC)

I think it's the "At the moment..." that jars a bit. Dunno quite why, though. But if you want it sort-of that way, I think I'd put: "Right now..." instead, and lose the "however".

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