What about changing it to "At that moment"? Past tense, while keeping the sentence more or less the same.
Also: SQUEEE. Original fic while being based off of one of your more awesome stories!
Also, uh, one of my favorite authors? Her first published book was initially written as Star Trek fanfic. So I'm just curious to see where this ends up going.
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Also: SQUEEE. Original fic while being based off of one of your more awesome stories!
Also, uh, one of my favorite authors? Her first published book was initially written as Star Trek fanfic. So I'm just curious to see where this ends up going.