I really like that final line, but this to me doesn't read as a prologue. It reads as the first few opening paragraphs of chapter one, and it feels strange that it fractures there, at the end, where that line should lead into the present tense.
I'm excited by this; I loved the fic version of this & am looking forward to reading it as origfic...
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Date: 2011-01-11 12:42 am (UTC)I'm excited by this; I loved the fic version of this & am looking forward to reading it as origfic...