The first thing, the God thing, is sort of meant to address that people can be cool about stuff when they're not encountering it, but then once they hit it again it can be a little of a shock to the system. I'll look at that bit though, see if I can clarify.
On the second one, yeah, that's just bad phrasing. Will fix. :)
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Date: 2011-01-11 06:45 pm (UTC)On the second one, yeah, that's just bad phrasing. Will fix. :)