She put a hand on his arm; the guard against the wall shifted slightly. Colin ignored it and gave her his most level look...
I assume you mean Colin ignored the hand on his arm (because you wouldn't say it if you were talking about a person), but it is confusing with the part about the guard stuck in there.
Analise gave him a discontented look Discontented doesn't seem like the right word to use, but I don't know what would be better.
Colm Byrne was what it said on his birth certificate, but there was some kind of problem with the spelling on his vaccination records.
Haha! I can definitely see something like that happening. My name on my birth certificate is Sara, but I have always spelled it Sarah with an h, so all my school documents and signatures and stuff is Sarah. My sister has two birth certificates(one with a hyphenated last name and one with just our dad's last name)because they wouldn't let my Mom just hyphenate my sister's name. (I'm not quite sure how that was better, and it definitely wasn't legal.) And because of the hyphenated last name, one of the names often gets mistaken as a middle name(somehow even if you write it in the space clearly marked 'print last name here').The forged identity possibilities are boundless... :D
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Date: 2011-01-16 12:44 am (UTC)I assume you mean Colin ignored the hand on his arm (because you wouldn't say it if you were talking about a person), but it is confusing with the part about the guard stuck in there.
Analise gave him a discontented look
Discontented doesn't seem like the right word to use, but I don't know what would be better.
Colm Byrne was what it said on his birth certificate, but there was some kind of problem with the spelling on his vaccination records.
Haha! I can definitely see something like that happening. My name on my birth certificate is Sara, but I have always spelled it Sarah with an h, so all my school documents and signatures and stuff is Sarah. My sister has two birth certificates(one with a hyphenated last name and one with just our dad's last name)because they wouldn't let my Mom just hyphenate my sister's name. (I'm not quite sure how that was better, and it definitely wasn't legal.)
And because of the hyphenated last name, one of the names often gets mistaken as a middle name(somehow even if you write it in the space clearly marked 'print last name here').The forged identity possibilities are boundless... :D
Oh the suspense!