I like the name thing (haven't read it before, so I don't know how it worked before), but I think it should tie into his current situation a bit more. It's a great story and character building, but then it feels almost passed over about how he uses that in the infirmary. Unless I'm just not understanding something, which is possible.
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Date: 2011-01-16 04:56 am (UTC)I like the name thing (haven't read it before, so I don't know how it worked before), but I think it should tie into his current situation a bit more. It's a great story and character building, but then it feels almost passed over about how he uses that in the infirmary. Unless I'm just not understanding something, which is possible.