Awesome story as usual, Sam. My only thing with this chapter is that you've been building up a fear of the Darkman's riders and Guye's soldiers but in this chapter it's like "Oh yeah, they're off fighting in the background somewhere." I'd have liked to see more of their fight and how that affected the fight between the prisoners.
So where does this story go from here? Obviously you have a lot of suggestions to deal with, but how will this go from here to book?
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The end *tear*
Date: 2011-01-17 01:14 pm (UTC)So where does this story go from here? Obviously you have a lot of suggestions to deal with, but how will this go from here to book?