Yeah, that one sentence is awkward -- I'm not sure there's any way around it, but I've been trying to fix it.
The Grace thing -- I am very reluctant to change it, especially at this late stage but also because it has meaning for Colin. He has literally lost his grace.
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Date: 2011-06-27 01:20 pm (UTC)The Grace thing -- I am very reluctant to change it, especially at this late stage but also because it has meaning for Colin. He has literally lost his grace.