When Analise visits, is the guard on duty the "tall woman leaning against the wall" or the male guard referred to later in the scene? Or are there multiple guards watching? That bit confused me.
This part about the Aryan Brotherhood as an increasingly looming threat is a new through-line this draft, right? I don't remember it from before. But the fact that I can't recall with certainty whether it IS a new addition probably means it's fitting in pretty seamlessly....
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Date: 2011-06-24 01:17 am (UTC)When Analise visits, is the guard on duty the "tall woman leaning against the wall" or the male guard referred to later in the scene? Or are there multiple guards watching? That bit confused me.
This part about the Aryan Brotherhood as an increasingly looming threat is a new through-line this draft, right? I don't remember it from before. But the fact that I can't recall with certainty whether it IS a new addition probably means it's fitting in pretty seamlessly....
~ c.