I'd expect Claire to be a bit more questioning and suspicious about Ellis, but the version of her in the story this time around might be different from the first one.
It'd also be neat to see a short scene of Australia, not enough to give anything away at all, but just a hint of what's happening there right now and where the story is going. Whet the appetite.
Otherwise I like the feeling one gets for the world.
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Date: 2012-04-21 06:01 pm (UTC)It'd also be neat to see a short scene of Australia, not enough to give anything away at all, but just a hint of what's happening there right now and where the story is going. Whet the appetite.
Otherwise I like the feeling one gets for the world.