Dunno if this is too late to the party, but I think some mention of the different acts in the Revue playbill would help clarify what they went to see. I think it might have been mentioned in the playbill in the original draft? I read chapter two and thought you'd cut Geppetto entirely and was going to be very sad about it.
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Date: 2012-06-04 06:49 am (UTC)