"A million reasons, most of them cowardly," [Jack] said.
If it weren't for Ellis having left the scene already, I would have thought that was him speaking. That isn't a bad thing, necessarily, but it was slightly jarring and may not be what you want happening there.
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Date: 2012-04-28 10:35 pm (UTC)If it weren't for Ellis having left the scene already, I would have thought that was him speaking. That isn't a bad thing, necessarily, but it was slightly jarring and may not be what you want happening there.