Hm. I think the issue is that the scene opens in the Temple and then quickly transitions to them back at the town house, but the only real way to ease that is to be like "And then they walked home" which is not necessarily terribly interesting. I'll work on it, I might be able to move things around a little.
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Date: 2012-05-08 02:19 pm (UTC)