The situation, if I'm remembering my own work right, was that Purva was younger in the initial draft and they're calling her a girl/child until Clare sees that moment where she's SUPER-FIERCE, and realises she's not at all a child. But she's older here, so that doesn't work.
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Date: 2012-05-02 02:36 pm (UTC)The situation, if I'm remembering my own work right, was that Purva was younger in the initial draft and they're calling her a girl/child until Clare sees that moment where she's SUPER-FIERCE, and realises she's not at all a child. But she's older here, so that doesn't work.